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DTA entry for give-then-take^^

Published: Apr 2, 2013

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EDIT 1// I lost my little Chick but YAY I WON MOUNTY!

Phew! I finished it and I'm pretty tired...But I LOVE the result!

Well, I made bios c:

~Basic Traits~
Full name: Spring Chick

Nickname: Chick
P.S. Mounty calls her "Rapunzel" :3

Reason of nickname: In her school, the other ponies called her "Chicken" or "Chick", but then it's became something like nickname.
P.S. Why Mountain Climber calls her that, read in his bio!

Species: Pegasi

Appearance: Spring Chick is very sweety. Her palette is bright and it reminds of spring. She has cute celestial blue eyes, which often look frightened. Her hair are silky and curly; she likes to plait pink ribbons in it.
I also would like to say that Chick is rather little, compared with other ponies in her age. And she's fond of making wreaths of her favourite flowers and often wears them along with other knick-knackery, made by herself.

Location: Well, let's start the fact that beyond the Everfree Forest (in my opinion) may be the mountains (not quite close, though). So, Spring Chick lives exactly at the foot of the mountains, where are a lot of fields of wonderful colorful flowers: bright-yellow dandelions, blue knapweeds, white daisies and other beautiful ones. But she often runs away from her home to the Everfree Forest. In fact, she spent most of her free time there, sitting under the oak-tree and talking to several small creatuers, which are not afraid of her; looking on the sun through the crowns of trees and just having a rest or sleeping.
Actually, the house where Chick lives is her parents' country house, but they had to move to the mountains because of their daughter's weak health. They also have a small farm with hens, cocks, chickens, ducks and other farm birds, and a garden with roses and lilies, daffodils and poppies, primroses and a big bush of honeysuckle. Spring Chick has her very little own garden with knapweeds and other blue flowers.
Farming is Spring Chick's family business, like the Apples' one is growing apples etc.

Likes: Mountains, mountainous landscapes; farm animals and birds, especially chicks; nature; spring; the sun and looking on it, its warm and light; listening to fairy tales and kind stories; writing about different wonderful places, which are so mysterious and fabulous (yeah, she actually has talent as a writer); drawing (although it's just like child's scrawls).

Dislikes: Large cities with polluted water and impure air, where it's very difficult to breath; large crowds (this can be explained by her anti-sociability); cold, winter nights; the moon; horror stories about scary ghosts, terrible monsters, evil spirits, ugly witches and other undead.

~Personality~
Positive traits: modest, sentimental, kind. But real herself she can show only the closest ponies. However, Spring Chick prefer to stay alone.
Negative traits: impatient, naive, poltroon, taciturn, unsociable
Temperament: Melancholiac. Sad and timid. Mentally unbalanced person. Chick often has sudden bouts of shock, fear etc.

~Special Talent~
Speical Talent: Her special talent is farming: looking after the chicks and her own little garden with beautiful blue flowers.

Cutie Mark: A little chick with a blue flower and colorful sun behind. The chick is a symbol of fauna, the flower is a symbol of flora and the sun is a symbol of heyday of the life.

Back-story & How she got her Cutie Mark:

"Another terrible day in school...Why the other ponies just can't leave me alone?! I... I could not longer be in their company, see their faces every day, even breath near them... I want to be alone! Please, understand it!.." with such thoughts I ran to the Everfree forest, the only quite place in my life. I know, you think no one can be so antisocial, but believe me, it's possible. And of course, of course I feel lonely...But just sometimes. And I still prefer animals and birds, those little cute creatures, lived in the forest, to ALL other ponies. They are evil, they have no soul. They can hate, but not love. And I'm sorry about it, really sorry, although they are so unfair to me...

Well, on the first schoolday I was approached by a few ponies. I know, maybe it's my fault and my mistake too, but I definitely didn't want to make friends with them. I so hoped if they could only understand it, but no. They threatened me, screamed at me and said something like: "You, stupid pony! Do ya know who am I, hey?!? Im the pony from the REACHEST family in Poniville, pff, in even Equestria! You are really a fool if you refuse to be my friend!"

Since that time, they started to badger me, with all my classmates... Every day was a torture for me. Certainly, over time I got used to this, but it was so difficult to stop notice them. I could do it! But it was also bad, because I started to stop notice anything else either. I started to lose my voice...

Now you know everything (and I very hope you understand it!) and you also know why I was there. I just remember that the sky suddenly darkened, the snowstorm began and I heard desperate cries of the birds and noticed two small chicks, pitifully squeaking and asking for the help. I remember, I took them and ran... Then everything was like in a fog.

***

When I came to life, I saw ice walls above, the left and the right of me. They shined so brightly and it was fabulous! For one moment I even thought I was in a dreamland!.. But it actually was just a cave. Then I noticed a young colt near. He looked rather worried...He told me his name - Mountain Climber. I know, it sounds strangely, but I could only pronounce: "M-moun-ty..." That colt asked:
- What's your name?
- S-spring Chi-ck...
- Are you fine?
Silence.
- Maybe I can help you?
Silence again.

I couldn't talk, but his voice sounded kinda he's caring me, I even dunno know... It was so nice ^.^ That day was better that all other days in my life! Then we got out from the cave and I went home, and at heart was so easily!

When I came back home, I suddenly noticed my Cutie Mark.

I can't understand how I got it.

But I was so happy!

Extra Info
Maybe you would like to know more about Spring Chick's behavior? Well, I can answer you...
The fact is that she's kinda like...an autist. Yeah, that's why she don't mind to be lonely, that's why she has sudden bouts of shock, and that's why she is talented as a writer. Actually, her parents firstly wanted her to be in home schooling (and she was in it!), but later they figured out their daughter definitely needs somepony to talk, or her voice will disappear finally...
If I'll be totally honest, her family was against of her education, but it was clear as noonday that, if something bad suddenly happen, Chick will not be able to live more because she can nothing. The solution was to send her to flight school and to Literary Society.

~Basic Traits~
Full name: Mountain Climber

Nickname: Mounty

The reason of nickname: This name was given him by Spring Chick, because it's difficult for her to pronounce long words and to speak in general...

Species: Earth pony

Appearance: Climber has calm, "gray" palette, which definitely does not go together with his personality. He is rather tall. And he always wears boots and his mountaineering gear.

Location: Mountain Climber's hometown is named Big Rock. It is also mining town. By the way, Mounty's family has its own rock farm. The colt often helps his father, but actually, he spends time to ride the trolley xD
His home is situated on the cliff. Sitting at the very edge, you can see very beautiful landscapes, although it is pretty dangerous. Mountain very likes to do it, when he reads. When he met Spring Chick, he built a seesaw to sit with her there and to admire the paysage.

Likes: Climbing mountains; reading, especially fantastic tales and adventure novels (but he also reads fairy tales xD); different urban legends; Full Moon; immerse himself in his own world; active games, like football, also he likes to jump, run and move a lot; escapades and danger.

Dislikes: Boring stories and other dull things; sitting at home a lot; computers, telephoes, TVs, Internet and other new and relatively new technologies (he thinks they are take too much free time from everyponies, prevent them from opportunity to play outdoors in active games etc.); when somepony offends the weaks and the little, unfair things.

~Personality~
Positive traits: Cheerful, brave, fair and square, enterprising, purepose.
Negative traits: Impudent, rashness, often gets into a mess because he doesn't think before he does anything to help or to protect the others.
Temperament: Sanguine-choleric. Impulsive, optimistic, active, with quick response to all the events taking place around him but at the same time he's inconstant, quite unbalanced, with sharply changing mood with emotional outbursts.

~Special Talent~
Special Talent: Climbing mountains, also rock farming.

Cutie Mark: Mountainous landscape in the disk.

Back-story & How he got his Cutie Mark:

"Do you know fairy tale about Rapunzel, the girl who always sit in the tower and who doesn't know much about the world? And do you believe in magic? I do, and I can say that sometimes fairy tales come to life..."

Well, one day, when I was walking in the mountains, I saw her through the small window. She looked very helpless and frightened, her eyes looked pointlessly and vainly... I've seen Rapunzel in her at that moment. I often came to her house and watched her. I knew she was in home schooling; I saw how she was learning poems and small texts and it seemed like she couldn't speak well, but maybe it really was just seemed to me...

Next time I met her in Poniville school, near the cabinet of Literary Society. Then I got there at night and took some pages from her unfinished book. Woah...It was really cool! I have never read anything similar in my life! I figured she is very talented as a writer.

After a while, I saw her near Flight school. I followed her, but soon lost the way. Suddenly, I heard screams; I ran to the sound. And there was that pony, I liked, and some other ponies, probably her classmates. They threated her and I hastened to help. When those ponies looked on me, I found out Diamond Tiara with her "friends". Pff! How they made me angry! When I got into their dispute, they ran away (actually, then I was rather scary...). But then I fell into a stupor. She didn't notice me! She just passed by! It was so pity...

*Then has happened something, which that made me forget about her.*

***

"Yay! Trade-Fair is coming soon! "

Very soon we had the Trade-Fair. I like them very much! You know, I'm just mere mortal, and I even don't visit Poniville often. That's why I waited for the Fair so long! I can eat cotton candy, taste the honey, play different interesting games with my friends, take part in many competitions and so on! I took my little sissy with me. That was her first day in Poniville...how it turned out, the last day too...

***

"It is completely my fault! I'm a stupid nerd bad brother! I'm even not a pony, I'm darnshit! Oh, God, why?! Whi did that happened with Evergreen?!..." I actually don't want to tell anybody about it...But I'll tell you...

I'm sure, you know I had a sister Evergreen. Why did I say "had" instead of "have"? Because she DIED because of ME!

My family have several traditions...One of them is climb the very top of the mountain, when you are seven. When I did it, there was my dad with me. When my dear sissy did it, the idiot came with her... I DID see she was afraid, I DID see how she was worry, but I did nothing... I...I could just saw screamed when fell down...

That month, I was not myself. I didn't joke, didn't laught, I was very sad and cried a lot. The depression completely broke me...

But time heals troubles, even very big.

***

I was in the Everfree forest that day; we played hide-and-seek. Suddenly, the sky darkened and the snowstorm began. I called my friends and started to run from the forest (cool, I know the short cut). I faced with someone and it was she - "Rapunzel", as I called her! I understood she was out and two little chicks near her, pitifully squeaking. I found a small cave, where we all hid...

***

When she came to life, I ran to her at one moment! I told me my name - Mountain Climber, but she could only pronounce "Mounty". I asked her:
- What's your name?
- S-spring Chi-ck...
Huh, after MUCH time since I've seen "Rapunzel", I knew her name at last!
- Are you fine?
Silence.
- Maybe I can help you?
Silence again.

Sadly, she couldn't talk... I decided to see her home.

When I came back, I suddenly noticed my Cutie Mark.

I can't understand how I got it.

But I was very happy!

Extra Info
Now I'll tell you a little bit more about Mountain Climber's sister Evergreen. She actually didn't die! It just seemed like that. But unfortunately, Mounty doesn't know about it...

Why I want them:
I would like to adopt them because they are really awesome characters! They have pretty amazing designs and I really feel kinda I can't live without them! If I win both, I'll draw MANY arts of them! Guys, wish me luck! I so need it!

Artwork: ME! ()
Characters' design: :3
Time: 6 hours spent for art, 9 hours for both bios and re-makes, and I'm so tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiired!*wanna go to bed * Sorry for mistakes also!

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Flyingfetlocks

Apr 15, 2013

Aww they're so cute!!!

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